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Salve Ezra, You have captured Ahmet's journey and the hard times he has faced in your comic strip. Well done. What were you learning (check the Learning Intention you glued into your book). What did you find easy? What did you find tricky (look at your Success Criteria to answer this). What would you change next time? Maybe you could add this to your blog and update it. Mā te wā, Mrs Naden
Kia ora Ezra, is this from a book you read? What a difficult time he had. Do you think you could do what he did? I see mRs Naden has suggested you add to the post. If you did this it would really open up your learning to us readers so we can understand a bit more about refugees and the challenges they have. from Mrs Torrie
Hi Ezra, I'm Frances from Kaingaroa School. I like how you put a speech bubble to show what Ahmet is saying. Maybe you could add to this post to make people who are reading your blog understand a bit more about the story. - Frances
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Salve Ezra,
ReplyDeleteYou have captured Ahmet's journey and the hard times he has faced in your comic strip. Well done.
What were you learning (check the Learning Intention you glued into your book). What did you find easy? What did you find tricky (look at your Success Criteria to answer this). What would you change next time? Maybe you could add this to your blog and update it.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden
Kia ora Ezra,
ReplyDeleteis this from a book you read? What a difficult time he had. Do you think you could do what he did?
I see mRs Naden has suggested you add to the post. If you did this it would really open up your learning to us readers so we can understand a bit more about refugees and the challenges they have.
from
Mrs Torrie
Hi Ezra,
ReplyDeleteI'm Frances from Kaingaroa School.
I like how you put a speech bubble to show what Ahmet is saying.
Maybe you could add to this post to make people who are reading your blog understand a bit more about the story.
- Frances